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Hello Zayden,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic idea! I really like how you used a concept of a game to make a movie. I also really like how you told us what a rift is and even showed us a picture if we wanted to know what it looked like. If I were to make a movie it would probably be a really comedic movie. Maybe next time you can add a little back story to the activity. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
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