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Attributions
Diversity - https://pixabay.com/illustrations/diversity-differences-qualities-1350043/
Papaun People - https://www.flickr.com/photos/eguidetravel/5987183212
Inuit People - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Inuit-Kleidung_1.jpg
Hello Zayden,
ReplyDeleteOnce again Vitaraag here, back to comment on your blog. I really enjoyed reading this blog post! Let me explain why I like it. Firstly, you added picture and attributed them. Nice for doing that. Secondly, you gave us lots of facts about both of these types of indigenous people. I thought that how Papuan people can speak 800 languages. I can't speak my language because I was born in a different country. Maybe next time you could add some information about the back story of the activity. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Vitaraag
Hey Zayden,
ReplyDeleteAgain this has been copied from the provided websites. The pictures are a great addition and help make it unique but you have plagiarised the text form the website.
Please give this another go. Including a link to the websites and saying that you are quoting from them would be a good start.
But you would still need a few sentences in you own words as well.
Daniel
(Reply to this comment when you have made the changes and then I will be happy to give you the full points for this task.)
Hey Daniel,
DeleteI have updated it now.
Hey Zayden
DeleteGood on you, I can still see the remnants of the old text but it's hard to suddenly forget it now that you know it with these research heavy tasks. I'm happy to give you the full points now, thank you for being mature and open to doing this task again.