Auckland city Mission is a charity that gives shelters for those who are in need for it. They help homeless people by giving them shelter, giving food to eat, and making them feel positive and safe so they aren't scared.
They even give the homeless a soft comfy bed, household items and even Christmas gifts, which I think is pretty cool.One day, maybe I might join the Auckland City Mission because I like helping people and it makes me feel good inside.
I hope you have enjoyed this blog post, what do you guys think of the Auckland City Mission? I catch you guys later. Bye!
Attribution - https://www.aucklandcitymission.org.nz/
Hello Zayden,
ReplyDeleteOnce again it is Vitaraag here. It is almost the end of the Summer Learning Journey. It ends on the 24 of January. There is still time to do some skipped activities or comments. I really enjoyed reading this blog post! Let me explain why I like it. Firstly, you added a picture and attributed it. Good job for doing that. Secondly, you told us about them. I never knew about the Auckland City Mission before this. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information about the base of the activity. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Vitaraag
Hey Zayden,
ReplyDeleteI know you are in a rush to finish off the last tasks but this has clearly been plagiarised and will not count towards your points.
This is a great charity to learn about. Have a read through their website till you get a good idea what they do and then post again in your own words.
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
Daniel
(also if you reply to this comment once you have done this then I'll see it faster and be able to award you the full marks for this activity).
Hey Daniel,
DeleteSorry I was in a rush. I guess I was just too excited to win. I will make sure to edit the other activity.
Sorry again,
Zayden
Hey Zayden,
DeleteThank you for the apology and for owning up to your mistake. You've made some really awesome and high quality posts so I've got high expectations for your work. Don't stress about time, you've still got 2.5 days and you're currently the top poster for Red Hill.
Hey Zayden,
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff Zayden, thanks for owning up and being willing to go back and correct your mistake, this is very mature and responsible of your.
And congratulations for completing the SLJ, For real this time! :) If you've still got time, today is your last chance to leave some thoughtful comments on other students blogs, maybe encouraging them to finish the tasks they haven't attempted or congratulating others that have finished.
I hope your enjoy the rest of your break before school starts again and when it does, I hope you start off strong and have loads of fun and get settled quickly.
See ya later.
Daniel :)